tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post4082264960684499809..comments2023-04-13T05:14:07.777-04:00Comments on Venus Cahill: Flash Fiction FridayVenusBookluvrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03834883038862865680noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-51895278744074715542012-06-04T20:05:31.303-04:002012-06-04T20:05:31.303-04:00Fantastic FFF!Fantastic FFF!Author Cyril J. Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08121700729761013966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-32667775957402766502012-06-03T13:25:59.164-04:002012-06-03T13:25:59.164-04:00Her son. Interesting! Such a mom to comment on wha...Her son. Interesting! Such a mom to comment on what her child hasn't told her. Is the new neighbor the muse I wonder?S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-30735807162343082832012-06-03T11:51:39.393-04:002012-06-03T11:51:39.393-04:00Wow, Venus. That is a different take but well done...Wow, Venus. That is a different take but well done!<br /><br />SLira aka BLMorticiaS.Lirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787307019842983456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-57716647519207057522012-06-02T12:52:00.183-04:002012-06-02T12:52:00.183-04:00Interesting. A little hard to follow in only 100 w...Interesting. A little hard to follow in only 100 words, but that might just be the nature of the piece. I didn't understand that the man entering was the father, and it felt like an odd twist at the end. I think that also left me feeling a little off/out of place with the piece. I love the descriptions of what he found and what that meant to him. You definitely have the base for a great piece, but I think the ending may have been rushed.<br /><br />Thanks for posting! So much fun reading what everyone puts up.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-59445737717254970562012-06-01T18:38:37.293-04:002012-06-01T18:38:37.293-04:00Oh wow..not the way you want someone to find out.....Oh wow..not the way you want someone to find out...Great FFFSavannah Chasehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03969287794654622274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-5476635068935155432012-06-01T16:59:13.976-04:002012-06-01T16:59:13.976-04:00Sharing such an intimate secret isn't exactly ...Sharing such an intimate secret isn't exactly easy. Loved your post, Venus.Bonni S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05568233942886562005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-55166303020079546212012-06-01T15:49:58.681-04:002012-06-01T15:49:58.681-04:00Surprise, surprise. If it was my son, I think I wo...Surprise, surprise. If it was my son, I think I would just pretend I didn’t see it. ^_^Yvonne Nicolashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10730269951175431124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7664444534251236551.post-5182242143801543062012-06-01T14:21:28.478-04:002012-06-01T14:21:28.478-04:00Writer's Block the ultimate hell! But what a ...Writer's Block the ultimate hell! But what a nice release.Kendel Davihttp://kendeldavi.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com