Thursday, December 1, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday -- December 2, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday.

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


When I’d arrived at this fabulous Victorian bed and breakfast I’d instantly fallen in love with the everything from the crown molding, to the intricate fixtures including the old-fashioned door knobs and key holes.

Then Blake had stepped forward and I’d just about passed out from the punch of lust that hit me. At the time I didn’t know how or when but I knew I had to have him and my first glance at the large bed and the frilly coverings and quilted headboard reiterated the thought.

This was one business trip where I’d get what I wanted too.

15 comments:

Sara York said...

Very good imagery. Love the Flash

Davee said...

Yes, love the details and it adds to the picture we have. I've been on business trips where I got my way too. LOL! Nice FFF!

Bonni S. said...

Hope she gets what she wants on her business trip. Blake must be a looker. I'd love to have instant lust...wait I did with my hubby. Or at least that's my story and I'm sticking to it. LOL!

Erika said...

awesomness! I love B&B's and especially old victorians. Great imagery, like Sara said.

Erika

Yvonne said...

I love the detail of the surroundings. The punch of lust hit me? Brilliant wording. Great job Venus.

LunaEllaAldora said...

Ooh I love the imagery of the Bed and Breakfast. Perfect location for this scene. I want my "punch of lust" right now! Mmm, great phrase, Venus! ;)

Naomi said...

An intriguing situation. I want to know more

Jade said...

Great post!! go for it woman, we only live once!!

Lindsey said...

Go for it, girl. He's is in for a wild ride. Great post.

Havan said...

You get it honey - and he will so thank you afterwards...heck maybe even during! hehe ;)

Lee Brazil said...

Nice! Yeah, you deserve to get what you want... Great Post!

Muffy Wilson said...

Ima hopin' I somma that, too. Great FFF:) xo

gemma parkes said...

Great detail! Loved your take on this!

Sherri Hayes said...

Sounds like this is a business trip she'd like to repeat. Often. lol. Nice FFF. :)

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Great post!