Thursday, December 29, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday December 30

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to the last Flash Fiction Friday of 2011.  Can't wait for next year's adventures.
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday
Cynthia loved spending time with her friend’s family. Marilyn always complained about her pain in the ass brothers but Cynthia loved each one of the four monsters. She’d practically watched the twins grow up and she was so proud of their accomplishments. She still couldn’t resist Donald’s dares, whether it be darts, hockey or arm wrestling. But Jon was the one she spent most of her time thinking about. He was charming and attentive but behaved towards her much the same way he treated Marilyn.
This weekend she was going to show him that she was definitely not his sister.

19 comments:

Jade said...

Go for it Cynthia! Men! they are so innocent sometimes!! :)

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Go for it Cynthia and please let us watch you seduce Jon! ;) Nice one, Venus!

Davee said...

Nice, and I love her intentions. Feisty FFF, great one.

Bonni S. said...

I hadn't thought of the sibling angle. Excellent post!

ERP said...

Rock on Cynthia! Go get the man.

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Naomi said...

Nice one Cynthia :)

Freddy MacKay said...

Very nice!

Jean said...

I'll bet he's pleasantly surprised! Love this take, so much said in so few words. Nice.

Yvonne Nicolas said...

That's right! Cut up that friend card and get to screwing. *grin* Cool post.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

I've only known one Marilyn in my life and she was a cutie just like the woman in this picture. Yes indeed, I was pleasantly surprised.

I liked it Venus, it's a story within a story. Very good.

Lee Brazil said...

Go Cynthia! Sometimes men are blind...

Sara York said...

Oh yeah, she needs to show him...

Sherri Hayes said...

Oooo. More please? I wanta see how she's going to show him. :)

Katie Harper said...

Oh Cynthia, that is a very slippery slope. If one of my friends tried to sleep with one of my four brothers I'd go from nice to bitch in .5 seconds. No one is good enough for my brothers.

GREAT JOB!!

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

Wow! Curious to see what will happen. Nice FFF!

Eden Connor said...

Love how she's watched them change from monsters to men. Nice job, Cynthia. Falling for a best friend's brothers is always tricky. Well done!

BLMorticia said...

Oh nicely done Venus.

Go Cynthia

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Yummy! A friend's brother, so taboo and so hard to resist.

Lisa Worrall said...

Ooooh - best friend's brother - should be resisted but you can't - I speak from experience :)