Friday, February 17, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday

 
The schmuck on her right was becoming increasingly incensed with Lisa’s flirtatious behaviour. If he hadn’t been so rude to me when we’d first met I’d almost feel sorry for him. Just because he’d bought her a few drinks he seemed to think he had a claim. I tried to cover my smirk but didn’t think I was successful, this guy was about to pop a blood vessel. If Mr. Frustrated could hang in there the entire evening he would be rewarded but for now I was going to enjoy the show and see if I could predict the outcome.

9 comments:

ERP said...

very interesting post Venus :)

CR Guiliano said...

Jealousy, jealousy again. Love it.

Davee Jones said...

I personally hope the interloper gets the shaft...and not literally. LOL

Kendel Davi said...

And what would the outcome be? Nice one and the dick who bought her the drinks probably won't make it till the end. Good work!

Unknown said...

Very nice. I love the tension.

Naomi Shaw said...

I wonder what will happen. It could make for a very interesting story. Good one

gemma parkes said...

Intriguing! He certainly looks like he's going to explode! Great ff!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Ohhh jealousy! I wonder what will happen after this little show is over? Hmmm def have me curious. :)

Lisa Worrall said...

Great post :) Lisa's are the worst flirts ;)