Thursday, April 12, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


I couldn’t believe I was naked, on the floor just waiting for Sutter, no nerves just anticipation. If someone had told me a year ago I’d marry the man of my dreams I wouldn’t have believed it. He really was a fantasy come true, a larger than life firefighter who was sexier than any of the calendar men I’d ever seen. He was real. He had a beautiful heart and it instantly called to mine. So here I was waiting to surprise him on the first night in our new home. I was ready to start our new life together.

14 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

What a way to celebrate! I love the phrase..."it instantly called to mine".... I loved this. Sweet, loving and a celebration of love and life:) xo

Bonni S. said...

That is so romantic. I love the anticipation you had going. I felt like I was on the floor with her watching the door. Excellent Flash!!!

Jp Archer said...

Very romantic. Newly weds have so much fun. Everything is still new and exciting and fresh. That maybe why I;ve been amrried four times. LOL. JK. Good flash. I enjoyed it.

michellelady said...

Awesome story. It was so sweet and sexy too. Lucky man to have such a sexy BBW waiting for him...and naked too. ;)

gemma parkes said...

Aw, beautiful. I think he'll be delighted to walk in and find her waiting...naked!

Naomi said...

I love the anticipation. The Celebration of their new life together. Please carry on the story. I want to know what happens when Sutter comes home

ER Pierce said...

Sweet and sexy, loved this. <3

Kendel Davi said...

The sweetness of her love is pure. A very telling statement of her admiration for this man. Oh, he will be surprised and know how lucky he is to have her.

Katie Harper said...

HA! I married that guy! LOVED THIS!!

S. J. Maylee said...

I loved so many things about this flash!! [He was real & ...instantly called to mine] are tasty nuggets on an already fine flash, well done

Davee said...

Beautiful description of a couple starting their lives together. great FFF

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic Flasher!!

Anonymous said...

Venus, there is nothing more beautiful than a woman, confident and in love...this one was sexy and happy. Lovely.

BLMorticia said...

Very romantic and sensual FFF

Nicely done

SLira