Sunday, April 22, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I'm so enjoying writing this one!

He watched her making friends with the women who usually frequented the coffee shop on the corner where they usually spent most of their time drumming up business. He’d told her to keep to herself and not talk to the prostitutes as there was no way they’d believe she was a common street walker. He watched as she quickly won them over and soon she was surrounded by many of the women who at first had turned up their noses at her. He watched her perform her magic and the usually hard women softened under her attention. He watched with a mixture of pride and annoyance as she seemed to win over most of the woman but his heart almost stopped beating when he watched an angry man approach the crowded table where she held court. The young punk grabbed the arm of a petite blonde and then kicked at the chair leg under his lovely imposter.


Goran Zidar said...

The premise is interesting, why is she pretending to be a prostitute and who are they after? ... thanks for sharing

S. J. Maylee said...

Pride and annoyance leads to all kinds of tension here and oh boy, love how this 6 ends, but dang I want more! Now! :) Glad you are enjoying writing, keep those fingers flying!!

Alix Cameron said...

Intriguing and I have so some many questions..great snippet to get my attention. Well done.l