Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I hope you enjoy reading these snippets as much as I've been enjoying writing this one! Keep in mind this is rough draft material :-)
“A Cosmo for my girl
and Dalmore for me.” He had the attitude down pat and didn’t even glance at the
waitress. If I hadn’t been pretending to be someone else I would have been
appalled by his actions and would have told him then and there.
“Try to immerse
yourself in the role and enjoy the club. I can tell you don’t really like it
here but think of it as an adventure that you’ll tell all your friends about.”
At his mention of my friends I realized how few I actually had.
2 comments:
Hmm, so much going on under the surface here, very intriguing. Terrific excerpt!
oh no, few friends
talk about pulling on my heart strings, Venus
This 6 sets up tension and conflict to come, very nice
Hey, your WIP counters in your side bar need to be updated, right? I don't think I've seen those move and I want to know you are writing, writing, writing :)
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