Saturday, June 30, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I hope you enjoy reading these snippets as much as I've been enjoying writing this one! Keep in mind this is rough draft material :-)

“A Cosmo for my girl and Dalmore for me.” He had the attitude down pat and didn’t even glance at the waitress. If I hadn’t been pretending to be someone else I would have been appalled by his actions and would have told him then and there.

“Try to immerse yourself in the role and enjoy the club. I can tell you don’t really like it here but think of it as an adventure that you’ll tell all your friends about.” At his mention of my friends I realized how few I actually had.


Veronica Scott said...

Hmm, so much going on under the surface here, very intriguing. Terrific excerpt!

S. J. Maylee said...

oh no, few friends
talk about pulling on my heart strings, Venus
This 6 sets up tension and conflict to come, very nice
Hey, your WIP counters in your side bar need to be updated, right? I don't think I've seen those move and I want to know you are writing, writing, writing :)