Friday, September 16, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


The rain soothed my annoyance.

“Told you skinny-dipping was a bad idea.”

He ignored my sarcasm and waggled his eyebrows, “You enjoyed yourself until you discovered our clothes gone AWOL.”

“It’s more the missing cellphone and car bothering me.” I couldn’t resist the urge to roll my eyes.

He reached for my hand, “At least the road is paved, so no gravel embedded in our feet.”

I found myself giggling at his carefree attitude. “Well we have the long walk home to decide how we explain to the kids why we show up after date night soaking wet and naked.”

13 comments:

Sara York said...

Awe, how cute, they went skinny dipping on date night.

Heaven Liegh said...

I hate it when that happens! great FFF

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Skinny dipping! Great idea! I wonder how they plan on getting into the house without the kids seeing them. LOL

Lisa Worrall said...

Yay - great minds think alike.

Fabulous first FFF - welcome to the madhouse my love - xx

Bonni S. said...

This one was a sweet love story. I loved it. Excellent for your first time out. Good on ya!

Chris Quinton said...

Aaaaww! This was sweet - and they can still laugh. That is a *strong* couple *g*.

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Great first FFF! Well done, Venus! ((hugs))

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Venus, this is a very good first FFF post, I guess this means that you're no longer a virgin now.

So, why was she upset with him, it was her idea to go skinny-dipping...wasn't it?

Welcome to the Club and it's great having you with us.

gemma parkes said...

Great 100, really enjoyed the reference to the road, good job!

VenusBookluvr said...

Awe,
Thanks for the kind words everyone. I enjoyed my first time ;-)

Katie Harper said...

Cute! I suggest the go with the, "It rained so hard our clothes ripped off" explanation.

Muffy Wilson said...

Great first showing!! I enjoyed it thoroughly, Venus:) xo

Davee said...

I really enjoyed this demonstration of adventure by a couple who does not let kids/family/etc get in the way of romance. nice job.