Friday, November 18, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday

Pete smiled at the enthusiastic man grasping onto his hands in gratitude, then he stifled an outright chuckle when the man fervently kissed his hands. Pete didn’t understand Italian but the sentiment was easy to decipher, Marco was definitely pleased. Pete wasn’t so sure his sister would appreciate the interference in her love life. She’d been brooding long enough and when her normally stoic lover had appeared heartbroken below his balcony this morning he’d given him the name of the hotel where she was hiding. Enough was enough, it was time for them to work things out or move on.

15 comments:

Sara York said...

Awe, I hope they work it out. How sweet.

yvonnenicolas said...

Fabulous FFF! Wonderfully written.

Erika Badass said...

OOOO nice one Venus! So...will she take him back? I loved the language barrier, but the enthusiastic kisses speak in any language <3 Nice one!

Erika

Bonni S. said...

LOved the FFF post. The brother sister angle I wouldn't have even thought to use. Excellent!

Lindsey said...

Such a good brother. Great view of this weeks pic.

Lisa Worrall said...

Love it :)

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

I was going to write my FFF as an Italian and going to use the Marco, but chagned it at the last minute. LOL Great FFF!

Davee said...

direct and unavoidable. loved the take on this FFF.

Lee Brazil said...

awesome! A little nudge and the path of true love is corrected! Great post!

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

What a nice brother, he gave his sister's errant boyfriend her address instead of beating his ass. Oh well, I guess Pete can always beat Marco to a pulp later.

Jade said...

great way of thinking!! I hope Marco and Pete'sister will work out whatever problems they have!

gemma parkes said...

Great 100! interesting take on this, loved it!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Hmm I wonder what kind of love life Pete has!!

Havan said...

Gotta love siblings...well not really but Pete is likable! lol :)

LunaEllaAldora said...

That was sweet! His sister better realize what a good brother she has. :)