Saturday, November 26, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This is a snippet from my current work in progress, one I'm hoping to complete very soon as Moonlight Tales the first in this series was one of my favourite's to write and I'm enjoying this one just as much!


Keith could tell she was losing her temper. The more agitated she became as her know-it-all cousin droned on the more aroused he became. He wanted to caress her shapely curves. Her pale skin was taking on the same tinge of red that was blazing in her eyes and all he wanted was to see her lose control. He loved that she looked like an exquisite china doll but she had this entire bad girl underneath. He’d waited long enough and he was going to get his hands on her.

8 comments:

Aimee Laine said...

So the droning doesn't curb his interest, huh? :)

K.E. Saxon said...

Ooh! Great sexual tension! Thanks for sharing.

gemma parkes said...

I hope he gets what he wants, and stops her droning on!

christine warner said...

Love the build up and the ending, showing his full blown determination! Great six :)

Bonni S. said...

Loved it. We're seeing his determination to see what he knows is there but she hasn't given. Absolutely love it.

Alix said...

Great pace. Terrific six.

Jayel Kaye said...

great build up of tension

Jennifer Wilck said...

Oh, great job!