Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction FridayThis is a play on a FFF post I did earlier. http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.com/2011/12/flash-fiction-friday-for-december-9.html I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.
I was nervous, but the excitement outweighed my anxiety. I still couldn’t believe Jenna had set this all up. I looked beyond the photographer and all his equipment to my younger sister who was looking on with pride and fought the tears welling up in my eyes.
This was it!
I was no longer left to the darkness, the time had come for me to be a shining star. Before I knew what I was doing I found myself teasing, bantering and flirting with the handsome professional. I was pleasantly surprised when he reciprocated. I’d finally moved beyond the shadows . . .
20 comments:
Love that you tied this to a past post!
Well done!
Great flasher. You could take this story further. Well done
You said a lot in this 100 words! Great piece.
Loved the sweetness of this story. And the close relationship between the sisters.
This post gave me a wonderful feeling. Made me want to hug myself. ^_^ There’s nothing like having a dream and actually living it. Excellent post.
Yay! I'm so glad she came out of the darkness :)
That was a lot of emotion in a few short hundred, Venus. Great job!
Vindication is always so sweet, she waiting patiently for her moment in the sun and she was rewarded. A sweet, sweet story. Well done.
I could really feel the emotion in this piece, I loved it!
Love it. Its awesome that she has confidence!
:D
This was wonderful! I clearly remember the post you refer to, and this is perfect! Great job!
not only did she move beyond the shadows, but she's doing it with style!!
Great post!
Venus, what a lovely way to bring the story full-circle. Touching and sweet! :)
Loved this piece. It's always a pleasure to read your FFF's. Nicely done.
No woman should be relegated to the shadows. Especially not one as beautiful inside and out as that one.
GREAT JOB!!S
OH wow! I loved this FFF. How she finally got to let her true self shine.
Sometimes we all need that little push. Nice FFF. :)
beautiful FFF, it always feels awesome when someone takes a step off the wall and becomes a blooming flower.
I actually love this. She is coming into her own. It is a powerful, wonderful moment for a woman!
Beautiful, heartfelt and moving. I loved this.
Post a Comment