Sunday, January 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday




I hope you enjoy a little more from my current WIP.



I was so angry I couldn’t stop myself from barging into his office. Sure my father was a fool but he was a loveable fool. Just because he’d watched too many episodes of reality tv was no reason to take advantage of him. Did this guy have no shame? Using his connections and fame to bilk naïve men out of their money was an awful way to increase his profit share. Well he would refund my father’s money immediately or I’d have ever major news outlet here within the hour.

10 comments:

gemma parkes said...

Intriguing six!

Joanne Stewart said...

Love her attitude! Makes you cheer for her! Great six!

Krystal Wade said...

Great emotions coming out of these six! Good job.

Carly Fall said...

Whew! Someone is mad! Wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of that verbal lashing!
Nice Six.

Jp Archer said...

Sounds like someone is about to stir up a hornet's nest. I am curious, is does she know the guy or just have a love at first sight moment, or lust at first sight? Can't wait to know more. Good six.

BLMorticia said...

Stirring 6 Venus!

SLira aka MichaelM

Melissa said...

Her father sounds like someone I know!

VenusBookluvr said...

Thanks for the fantastic comments. I'm really getting in to this story and am so glad you all seem as interested as I am :-)

Sandra Sookoo said...

I love her go get 'em attitude :-)

DeAnna Felthauser said...

I love that she's a strong woman willing to stand up for what or who she believes in! Great six!