Thursday, February 2, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday



I sat on the park bench just soaking up the sights, smells and sounds of the beautiful fall day. The two men had already been there and my eyes kept returning to them.

I couldn’t stop my gasp. The dark-haired man’s bracelet was just like one I’d seen years ago. It had not been all in my imagination! Memories of that scary night came flooding back. I was rescued by a man with the kindest eyes ever. I had thought he was my guardian angel. And now twenty years later I found myself looking into those same chocolate brown eyes.

19 comments:

gemma parkes said...

Great storytelling, want to read what happened!

Naomi said...

Oohh now I really need to know more. There is so much to tell about this story

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Very exciting. Liked the way you put the narrator in as an observer. Hints at so much more...loved it!

Jade said...

I can see some mystery there!! I would love to read more of it :)

Cassandre Dayne said...

Very nice - this one makes me want more

C R Guiliano said...

Impressive. Such a tease, now my curiosity is peaked to know what happens... well done!

Sara York said...

Wow, I want to know more. How sweet and special!

Bonni S. said...

So those chocolate brown eyes hadn't aged. Must be vampire or some other super natural creature. Excellent post!

Kendel Davi said...

Nice use of time to make this one really connect. Great work!

Lee Brazil said...

Yes...there's definitely more to this story! Great post.

BLMorticia said...

nicely Done Venus, very intriguing!

Yvonne Nicolas said...

Cool! Twenty years later and the guy still looked the same. Hot immortal guy! *grin* Nice post.

Jp Archer said...

Oh Venus.... do tell where you are going with this. I mean it. TELL ME! This could be the beginning of a little paranormal, romance, mystery thing. Good job. Flash me anytime.

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Nice FFF! I want more!!

VenusBookluvr said...

Thanks for the comments. I think I might have to write this story!

Sherri Hayes said...

Oooo. Who is he?

michellelady said...

I love this...and I want More. It was an awesome take on the picture. I love Angel stories...addicted to them really. I could see this going there.

Lisa Worrall said...

Oooh Oooh - what happened - I wanna know!

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

Mmmm def have me curious as to what happens next. :)