Thursday, March 22, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday -- Cougar’s Cantankerous Companion

Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday

Cougar’s Cantankerous Companion

I’d told Mark he was giving off signals but instead of taking my advice, he got petulant and started drinking even more. This was the problem with dating a much younger man, now he would sulk and treat me like his mama.
I’d watched as Regier approached him and complimented Mark’s long dark cloak. I had told Mark his new friend was making a pass at him he’d gotten angrier, called me a bitch and guzzled another drink with his new buddy.
I couldn’t keep the smirk off my face as I watched Regier lean in to kiss my man.

14 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

Amd then, and then....why the smirk? Is a three-way looming? I loved it and hated it for not telling me more! Bravo, Miss V:) xo

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Very nice. What is coming in the near future? I see a three way or some major disapointment down the pike, but either way this is pretty hot.

Lee Brazil said...

Great post! Sometimes people have to learn through experience, don't they?

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Oh yummy! Great FFF!

Bonni S. said...

Loved it, Venus! SO is he a closeted gay man or in denial? SOunds like he isn't the best judge of character. He should try it once and find out if he likes it. Great FFF.

S. J. Maylee said...

on my, didn't see that coming, you little sneak! brilliant!

Naomi said...

Oooh I sense a threesome. Hot!!

Anonymous said...

Oh, Venus was different. the fascination is what did Mark really want?

C R Guiliano said...

Oh wow! Must have more. Crave to know what happens. Wonderful post!!

Lisa Worrall said...

I want more! Well done, honey x

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Wow Fun Flasher!!

Jp Archer said...

Makes me wonder if there is a more than meets the eye? LOL. Always a good FFF when the readers are wondering "What happened next?" Brava!

BLMorticia said...

Heh, I want to know what happens next

Nicely done

SLira

Yvonne Nicolas said...

Mmm, sounds like a delicious 3-way in the works. ;o)