Saturday, April 28, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I hope you enjoy reading these snippets as much as I've been enjoying writing this one!

I wasn’t surprised by how good looking he was, after all my research I knew what to expect. What I didn’t expect was the appreciation I could clearly read in his beautiful green eyes and my response to it. Here was the man responsible for taking advantage of my father and causing my poor mother daily panic attacks. I wasn’t a teenage girl infatuated with a glamorous star, my hormones did not do my thinking for me. I took a deep breath. I took a deeper breath and let him have it.


Delena Silverfox said...

Ooh, what'd she say, what'd she say!

The prose here is so smooth and strong. It's a wonderful voice, easy to get caught up in while reading. And I wanna know what she said! =)

S. J. Maylee said...

I'm so proud of her and man oh man am I excited her read what she says!

patonlorraine said...

LOL! I love that one deep breath wasn't enough! :)