Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I hope you enjoy reading these snippets as much as I've been enjoying writing this one!
My heart just about stopped beating when Sandy
Cullen opened her front door. The middle-aged woman was a throwback to a time
when secretaries frequently slept with their bosses. She might have been the
same age as my mom or even twenty years older, it was hard to determine with
all the make-up she was wearing. Her outfit reminded me of something the
starlets of the 50s would wear. She ushered us in to her kitchen and got us
both giant glasses of homemade lemonade. “I’m not sure what I can tell you
about Larry other than I really wished I could have stayed on with he and
Ralph, it was a pleasure working for them. But with the business not even off
the ground yet they really couldn’t afford to keep me around full time and I
need the money.”
3 comments:
A lot of different emotions there! Nice job! ;)
Felt like I was there. Hmm, she wishes she could have kept working for them. Oh, and I want some of that lemonade :)
Terrific description, felt like I was there with them, drinking that lemonade! Great six!
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