Welcome to this week's Tantalizing
Tuesday where we pick any picture that captures our fancy and write no more and
no less than 200 words!
Naomi Shaw: http://naomisfantasies.wordpress.com
Lee Brazil : http://leebrazilauthor.blogspot.com
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca/
Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday-3/
Muffy Wilson: http://muffywilson.blogspot.com
Sherry Palmer: http://michellechatton.blogspot.ca
ER Pierce: http://www.erpierce.com
Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Jp Arhcer: http://jp-archer.blogspot.com
Leann Mitchell http://leannmitchell.blogspot.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com/
Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com
Benjamin Russell: http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com/
Havan Fellows: http://havanshawthaven.blogspot.com/
It was starting to freak me out. Every so often when
I was in the ladies room I would feel the temperature drastically drop and I
could hear someone walking around. Then I the automatic paper towel dispenser would
go off and I’d hear a spritz like a perfume bottle then smell an odd scent. The
first few times this happened I assumed someone had come in quietly after me
just to check themselves in the mirror but I soon dismissed that when I noticed
no feet were visible under the stalls. It had gotten to the point where I tried
holding out all day I was now so paranoid to go into the bathroom. I felt like
a complete idiot, I couldn’t share this with anyone or they’d be carting me off
in a straightjacket. It had happened too many times for me to dismiss it
though.
I had simply had too much to drink today and was
going to have to walk into the cold and scary place. When I didn’t feel the
temperature drop as I took care of business I had almost convinced myself that
my anxiety was all for nothing. That’s when I saw her!
16 comments:
Ooooh, a ghost story. Love those! Wonder what the odd scent is that she keeps getting a whiff of? Intriguing!
Love it. Who is she? What happens?
Oh, you have to continue this! Who is she? Why does she haunt a restroom of all places?
You MUST, MUST, MUST write more of this one!!!
Hmmm...interesting premise here, Venus!
Exciting post, this would make an excellent story!
Good suspense! Wow!
You held me spell bound there.... so who is she, this Ghost? You gotta tell more. LOL
Very nice!
Oh Lordie, I'm reading this post and I'm trying to picture the scene in my head. Woman sitting on the toilet, trying to "care of business" - and trying 'not' to scare herself.
Well, if she was having problems going before, what she saw surely scared the piss out of her. Too funny. Venus, great job.
Oh, how cruel WHO??? You gotta tell us how this ends, or at least what happens next The John is haunted?. Gimme more:) xo
Oh you drew me right in with this. Chilling. What was the scent? was it a ghost, or a trick? Poor woman too afraid to pee. Great teaser
Great Tease!! Who is she? What is the scent?
Great job, had me sitting waiting anxiously to find out more. That is a great Tease to me. Poor girl, at least the ghost is kind enough to scare to poop out of her in the bathroom. ;)
Oooo creapy. Loved it!
Her? Who is she? Love a good ghost story! Excellent post!
Ghost stories always freak me out! Well done!
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