Welcome to this week's Tantalizing
Tuesday where we pick any picture that captures our fancy and write no more and
no less than 200 words!
I looked across the rugged moor to the still
imposing stone structure. I couldn’t explain how, but it called to me on a
primal level. I felt a deep connection as if I were coming home. I knew I
belonged here. The clean crisp air settled in my lungs and I felt the urge to
get nearer. I never thought I’d get to visit Scotland yet here I was. But I was
nowhere near close enough to the intriguing ruin. I felt a compulsion to get ever
closer. I had to get closer. Stepping away from the other tourists I started to
slowly walk across the uneven ground and barely noticed the furrows. The low
scrubby vegetation scratched at my feet through my inappropriate sandals but I
barely felt the abrasions. I wasn’t really sure how long it took me to cross
the damp soil but soon I was standing alongside the pebbled shore staring
longingly across the still waters.
And that was when I saw him, beckoning me to his
side. He was huge and I couldn’t be certain if he were ghost or reality. All I
knew was his heart called mine and I was prepared to answer.
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Naomi Shaw: http://
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Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com
Cg Brumby: http://
Madison J Edwards: http://
Molly Synthia: http://mollysyntha.com
Veronica Fredricks: http://
Dianne Hartsock http://
Venus Cahill: http://
Cyril J. Michael: http://
Cassandre Dayne http://
Benjamin T. Russell http://
Leann Mitchell http://
Bonni Sansom: http://
Ray Sostre: http://
Gemma Parkes: http://
10 comments:
Sounds like the beginning of an awesome ghost story! Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved it. :)
Mysterious and enchanting teaser! I wonder who HE was and if he was ghost or flesh. Very well written!
Seriously, this sounds like the beginning of an epic romance novel! Loved that tease. I wanted to know more! Great work. :)
I agree with everyone above. This could definitely make a great novel.
Sounds like you're onto a timeless ghost romance story. Something tells me that these two have met before... a long long time ago. Okay, I'm just dying to read more.
Great teaser, so well crafted too.
Wonderful imagery and story building! We all want to know who and what he is, perfect teaser!
Very romantic, I love the feel of the story.
What a lovely story. I agree I want more too!
Great use of description. Well written and the start of something bigger perchance
Beautifully descriptive. Ghostly and romantic. You have to write more. I want to know who he is. Great teaser
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