Thursday, August 16, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday



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Phil gave another disgruntled groan, which I overlooked as he poked his croissant. I scanned the paper and ate my cereal. He muttered and if I hadn’t been ignoring his tantrum I would have chastised him for cursing at me.
“Shit Jenni, I know you love the remodelled kitchen but I’m sick of take-out and breakfast for dinner. When can we use the damn appliances? We paid a fortune to outfit this place with practically commercial equipment. ”
I gave him a big smile. “Honey, you can start cooking any time you want but you’d better not make a mess!”

5 comments:

Benjamin T. Russell said...

*Smiles* I'm guessing poor Phil also hears that - "you better not make a mess" comment whenever the two of them have sex. It seems to me Ms. Jenni has a few cleanliness issues and I wouldn't be surprised if those issues also carried over into the bedroom. No way is she sleeping in a wet spot.

Nicely done Lady V. - Muwah!!@

S.J. Maylee said...

Classic. She makes it too pretty to use, like my great aunt's front room. But this is the kitchen. I cant believe it, but I'm siding with the guy here :)

Naomi Shaw said...

LOL. I love it! He'better have a cloth close to hand for the tiniest spot of dirt or she'll never allow him in the kitchen again. Great flash

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic Flasher!!

Julian Spong said...

love it great flash