She should have listened to Carly and never tried to do this
on her own. Really why couldn’t she have just waited? Planting the bug had been
so easy. Now as she frantically pulled apart the sectional sofa searching for
the electronic device she had planted two days ago, she wondered if indeed it
had been as easy as she’d first thought. She almost didn’t hear the door open. When
he stepped so stealthily through she knew she had landed squarely in his trap.
She would be his next victim and it would be up to Carly to catch him.
9 comments:
Ohhh...I love the suspense...Fantastic FFF.
Very well done. Leaves one wanting more.
Hmm, so did he find the bug? Interesting flash Venus :) I'm curious where you're going.
Very exciting, Venus. the tension is wonderful!
What? Oh, no!! I want to see her fight him off. Yes, I want more.
Venus, so suspenseful what a cliffhanger! Loved this FFF:) xo
That was suspenseful! I loved it!
Great story! exciting and tense!
You could really go somewhere with that one. Loved the suspense and anticipation. I like your style, too.
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