Thursday, May 3, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


She should have listened to Carly and never tried to do this on her own. Really why couldn’t she have just waited? Planting the bug had been so easy. Now as she frantically pulled apart the sectional sofa searching for the electronic device she had planted two days ago, she wondered if indeed it had been as easy as she’d first thought. She almost didn’t hear the door open. When he stepped so stealthily through she knew she had landed squarely in his trap. She would be his next victim and it would be up to Carly to catch him.

9 comments:

Savannah Chase said...

Ohhh...I love the suspense...Fantastic FFF.

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Very well done. Leaves one wanting more.

ER Pierce said...

Hmm, so did he find the bug? Interesting flash Venus :) I'm curious where you're going.

Kendel Davi said...

Very exciting, Venus. the tension is wonderful!

S. J. Maylee said...

What? Oh, no!! I want to see her fight him off. Yes, I want more.

Muffy Wilson said...

Venus, so suspenseful what a cliffhanger! Loved this FFF:) xo

Leann Mitchell said...

That was suspenseful! I loved it!

gemma parkes said...

Great story! exciting and tense!

Bonni S. said...

You could really go somewhere with that one. Loved the suspense and anticipation. I like your style, too.