Saturday, May 26, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Well, again today I've decided to share a little more of my WIP Dad the Bounty Hunter.
I hope you enjoy reading these snippets as much as I've been enjoying writing this one!

I was surprised to find him deep in concentration at his big desk. This was the first time I’d seen Jack wearing glasses and I must admit he couldn’t look more attractive to me than he did at this moment. There were stacks of papers surrounding him and his slight frown was endearing. I must have made some noise because he jerked up and when he saw me his face broke out into a huge smile. I hadn’t realized I’d been holding my breath until it whooshed out. “Hey there, mister.”


Alix Cameron said...

Good work with the POV. Great six.

Veronica Scott said...

I could really visualize him from the description - well done! And I enjoyed the happy feelings - great six!

Tarah Scott said...

Very nice.

Karyn Good said...

Great six! I love a guy in glasses, too!