Thursday, July 12, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on a picture. To see the picture and the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday




I couldn't believe he had purchased this piece as a gift. The photo embarrassed me and made me feel inferior but Davis was so pleased with his choice I felt awful for my negative feelings. I blinked back tears; perhaps he didn't know me at all.

"Thank you."

He gave me a soft kiss on my nose. "I saw you looking at this photographer’s work when we went to the showing a few months back. As you studied the photos expressions flit across your face and I remember thinking I could spend the rest of my life just watching you."

10 comments:

Serenity King said...

Aww, that was so sweet! Thanks for the flash.

S. J. Maylee said...

Oh Venus, the tension and passion in this flash is breath taking. Fabulous.

Muffy Wilson said...

Melting into any man's arms that just said that last line.........bet she stopped tearing and sighed. Loved it, as usual, Venus:) xo

gemma parkes said...

Aw, that's sweet, his intentions were thoughtful. Hope she can get over her insecurities. loved this post!

Yvonne Nicolas said...

He fell in love with the expression she had as she gazed at the photo. That's awesome. So while she was watching it, he was watching her. Lovely post.

Savannah Chase said...

Oh wow, how amazing is this. I loved your take.

Leann Mitchell said...

Great flasher. I hope she learns to like the photo.

Veronica Fredricks said...

Sweet, sad and emotional post!

Bonni S. said...

So emotional and sweet. I'm glad he was so thoughtful to consider her needs, but too bad she wasn't appreciative. Love your work Venus.

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic FFF!